*Random choice of six sentences from my Work-In-Progress*
She came to realize that Nian and his friends truly
were the voiceless of this world, dispossessed and completely stripped of their rights
as
human beings.
As she thought about the inequity of the very system she was about to become a part of, her strides turned into
furious stomps.
They reached the little grove at noon and found a shady
and cool site amidst the trees where Kaley leaned against a mighty stem to rest for a
while.
Her feet were sore, and she felt the bark clinging to her from behind, which provided some much needed relief to her back.
Nian sat down across from her,
huddling up against a bulky stub of a tree.
He didn't look tired at all, he was just as hungry as he always was, and once again Kaley marvelled at his resiliance against physical strain.
Gives me so many questions, Dana! I know already that I like Kaley. Is Nian a love interest? :-)
ReplyDeleteSix sentences is just so little!
Good six! Glad to see you doing this. :-)
He is the love interest, yes! But as he comes with his own set of personal baggage, and she is in a position of authority over him, she doesn't want to indulge in it. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, I can't wait for next Sunday. :)
Interesting. I'm curious to see what you come up with next.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jess, so am I. Looking forward to Sunday, and cute farmer boy Luke in particular. :)
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