*I think I messed up on the timeline a bit, meaning that I was supposed to get my six lines ready earlier - AM EST wise. Well, there is no excuse, except me, yelling filthy oathbreaker at the bathroom mirror.
Anyways, here they are, my Sunday's Six from my fantasy novel, a WIP. While you're here, check out the other Sunday Sixers :)*
As Kaley and Nian came closer, the
Mage muttered something incoherent, and although Kaley didn't understand the exact words,
she had no trouble deciphering the insulting connotation they carried.
"What's
this?" he barked at Morgen, while pointing a tremoring index finger at both of
them.
"These are Kaley and Nian, Guardian and Mage," Morgen said, reaching out her arms between them as though trying to mediate "and this is Storm."
"It's what they call me," Storm added after a silent pause. Maybe it wasn't his
real name, but he sure looked like a Storm, Kaley thought, studying his drawn features
suspiciously.
There was something deeply unsettling about his face, half-hidden beneath the cowl, and wild, grey strands of hair, emerging in untaimed tufts from within the blue cloth.
I know who Kaley and Nian are from last week. I would love to read more of this scene. There is a lot going on--a lot of people, and some of them being introduced.
ReplyDeleteExcellent description of Storm :-) ! Good six!
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Was a bit worried about this. Storm wasn't initially in the story, I added him later, but now I can't imagine the story being without him. It's so strange how much characters can grow on you, it's a pleasure writing "him". :)
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