Angry Man - revised

It seems like today is garbage-collecting day, at least some of my works will see the lower end of the trash can!

I took my latest short story "The Angry Man" and threw out everything bad about it. I hope there will be something left when I'm finished..

To start, how about the choice of title? Is there anything more uncreative I could have come up with?
I guess not!

In retrospect, I'm not sure if the whole situation isn't just a big yawn. Man getting pissed at woman at cash register, because she stared at him! It all sounds extra stupid today or is it just me?

Ok, the title no longer exists. The story formerly known as "The Angry Man" is now edited, revised and renamed:

The Confrontational Gaze