tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post6938473042922082559..comments2023-03-27T01:10:56.121-07:00Comments on <center>Idiots & Earthquakes - A Writer's Blog</center>: #Friday FictioneersDasNukhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-6566478376719069962012-07-08T00:33:32.313-07:002012-07-08T00:33:32.313-07:00So melancholy and romantic together. I can feel hi...So melancholy and romantic together. I can feel his soul whither and the parallel description of his surroundings makes it all so powerful. <br /><br />Beautiful.M.L. Falconerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14118491465472334192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-45446226414358481742012-07-07T10:05:10.747-07:002012-07-07T10:05:10.747-07:00The earth turning fallow, the sea of bones image -...The earth turning fallow, the sea of bones image -- you gave this a really nice pacing and poetic feel. Also the tone of the narrator, sad, lost, but also warning, was really effective. <br /><br />Brian (http://pinionpost.com/2012/07/06/kyawe/)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-79852131930855263122012-07-06T20:37:03.665-07:002012-07-06T20:37:03.665-07:00This reads very much like poetry. It flows well. I...This reads very much like poetry. It flows well. It's sad, but very good.<br /><br />My link: "Last Cigarette" http://therantinarkansan.blogspot.com/2012/07/friday-fictioneers-last-cigarette.htmlJ.C. Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08391103821713402897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-18094918497062144332012-07-06T18:37:21.940-07:002012-07-06T18:37:21.940-07:00I can feel the forlorn ambiance. Great use of word...I can feel the forlorn ambiance. Great use of words.<br /><br />http://ebooksscifi.wordpress.com/2012/07/06/seclusion-by-ilyan-kei-lavanway-for-madison-woods-friday-fictioneers-100-word-flash-fiction/Ilyan Kei Lavanwayhttp://ebooksscifi.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-18355451462923877232012-07-06T18:08:41.546-07:002012-07-06T18:08:41.546-07:00It was haunting and sad, well done.
http://yaralwr...It was haunting and sad, well done.<br />http://yaralwrites.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-64382955894787853032012-07-06T16:56:22.881-07:002012-07-06T16:56:22.881-07:00Poetic Prose. I'm not sure I understand it...b...Poetic Prose. I'm not sure I understand it...but maybe that's the point. Beautifully written.loranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-66110932433720957502012-07-06T09:58:08.859-07:002012-07-06T09:58:08.859-07:00I can't even find a favorite phrase, the entir...I can't even find a favorite phrase, the entire piece was so evocative. The words just sank into me as I read and whatever, whomever, is speaking had me riveted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-80135335124355396672012-07-06T06:37:09.017-07:002012-07-06T06:37:09.017-07:00I really love the visual you came up with. Thanks ...I really love the visual you came up with. Thanks for having me. :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-25591720239622001382012-07-06T05:51:05.052-07:002012-07-06T05:51:05.052-07:00Also, forgot to mention, welcome to the party!Also, forgot to mention, welcome to the party!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-38060640187110100592012-07-06T05:48:57.018-07:002012-07-06T05:48:57.018-07:00Very nice!
I had the visual of a lonesome being t...Very nice!<br /><br />I had the visual of a lonesome being treading across the barren land, each footfall making a dusty cloud that drifts away in the breeze. Any living plants withering as he walks past, a scorpion emerging from it's lair only to dessicate in his presence.<br /><br />http://thebradleychronicles.wordpress.com/2012/07/06/flash-fiction-friday-lovers-embrace/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-56595526548583974802012-07-06T05:41:36.190-07:002012-07-06T05:41:36.190-07:00Super sad! Reflective and utterly sad. Nice work.
...Super sad! Reflective and utterly sad. Nice work.<br /><br />My linky: http://unduecreativity.wordpress.com/2012/07/05/desert-warrior/C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-65458863389701721922012-07-06T04:51:48.607-07:002012-07-06T04:51:48.607-07:00Thanks for bringing that to my attention, I meant ...Thanks for bringing that to my attention, I meant plains. I always get them mixed up. :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-81552567052347100732012-07-06T03:47:09.916-07:002012-07-06T03:47:09.916-07:00A well crafted story. Haunting and lyrical. Mythic...A well crafted story. Haunting and lyrical. Mythic and fey.<br /><br />Must ask if you meant 'plane' or 'plain' in the beginning. Would help with formation of image in my feeble brain pan. <br /><br />Aloha,<br /><br />Doug<br /><br />http://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/2012/07/06/nurture-or-nature/Douglas MacIlroyhttp://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-15329949894086941232012-07-06T03:12:25.389-07:002012-07-06T03:12:25.389-07:00This sounds like another diary entry and I'd l...This sounds like another diary entry and I'd love to know what it was that brought them to the point they are at and how they move away from it to something else. Really drew me in, thanks for sharing it.<br /><br /><br />I'm on the list but for those who happen across, my offering is also here: http://womanontheedgeofreality.com/2012/07/06/reality-brought-forth/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-81620124146242259162012-07-06T03:03:19.335-07:002012-07-06T03:03:19.335-07:00What a sad and beautifully written piece. I hope y...What a sad and beautifully written piece. I hope your character hangs on and finds happiness. Nice job!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-86933189673270626562012-07-06T00:06:38.913-07:002012-07-06T00:06:38.913-07:00Combined with the dilapidated building, this is ve...Combined with the dilapidated building, this is very effective. Good job. http://kaitlinandmichaelbranch.com/2012/07/06/friday-fictioneers-10/Kaitlin Branchhttp://kaitlinandmichaelbranch.com/2012/07/06/friday-fictioneers-10/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-30906891961980603432012-07-05T21:40:52.016-07:002012-07-05T21:40:52.016-07:00Poetic lilt with a dark feel. Very nice.
Mine is...Poetic lilt with a dark feel. Very nice.<br /><br />Mine is #15 on the Link List - here for others: http://erinleary.wordpress.com/2012/07/05/flash-friday-fiction-11/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-57215438449202057022012-07-05T20:56:00.650-07:002012-07-05T20:56:00.650-07:00This is beautiful writing, Daniela.
http://logo-l...This is beautiful writing, Daniela.<br /><br />http://logo-ligi.com/2012/07/06/healing/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18149363845050477601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-946682172867241282012-07-05T20:08:46.607-07:002012-07-05T20:08:46.607-07:00This was very poetic. Lyrical. Loved the image you...This was very poetic. Lyrical. Loved the image you created.<br /><br />http://writersclubkl.wordpress.com/2012/07/06/friday-fictioneers-lone-rubble/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-63595994973045179742012-07-05T18:01:28.682-07:002012-07-05T18:01:28.682-07:00This could be a poem. It's very lyrical in its...This could be a poem. It's very lyrical in its cadence.<br /><br />I could picture a godlike creature building his world. Intriguing and terrifying :)<br /><br />Visiting from Friday fictioneersCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-52028371039051420662012-07-05T17:25:32.454-07:002012-07-05T17:25:32.454-07:00A moving, mournful story. Thank you for sharing it...A moving, mournful story. Thank you for sharing it.<br /><br />http://stonesoupnovelist.com/2012/07/05/a-scene-the-besjian-in-the-bar/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03446829567641629659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-35313287831925345682012-07-05T13:14:15.509-07:002012-07-05T13:14:15.509-07:00solemn, a harbinger of suffering...
It reads like...solemn, a harbinger of suffering...<br /><br />It reads like a prayer.billgncshttp://bwfiction.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com