tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post6186400577497513995..comments2023-03-27T01:10:56.121-07:00Comments on <center>Idiots & Earthquakes - A Writer's Blog</center>: Weekend Writing Warriors: Forever GoneDasNukhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-47699439682776703762013-02-24T12:09:02.905-08:002013-02-24T12:09:02.905-08:00I'm going to echo everyone else who loved the ...I'm going to echo everyone else who loved the sky's darkening coat. That was brilliant. Good use of the sensual in this. The dimming light, the icy wind, the sounds of the kitchen. Very good.Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-18352594866301269342013-02-24T10:42:06.364-08:002013-02-24T10:42:06.364-08:00Love the "darkening coat" line! You hav...Love the "darkening coat" line! You have conveyed Artie's feelings so well. Interesting story! :-)Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-39655024909466439602013-02-24T10:06:33.602-08:002013-02-24T10:06:33.602-08:00Even though I don't really know these times wi...Even though I don't really know these times without massive paperwork, I still miss them. That's a little odd, isn't it? Thank you for your comment. :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-53211692641661733312013-02-24T10:00:19.253-08:002013-02-24T10:00:19.253-08:00Wow, thanks, I'm glad! :)Wow, thanks, I'm glad! :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-25028898684945470322013-02-24T09:59:22.477-08:002013-02-24T09:59:22.477-08:00Thanks Elaine. :)Thanks Elaine. :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-25220052899966094912013-02-24T09:58:38.956-08:002013-02-24T09:58:38.956-08:00Steven, thank you so much. Glad you like it. :)Steven, thank you so much. Glad you like it. :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-84971110538422419982013-02-24T09:57:47.759-08:002013-02-24T09:57:47.759-08:00Thank you Marcia :)Thank you Marcia :)DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-74728379494926079872013-02-24T09:44:15.917-08:002013-02-24T09:44:15.917-08:00I like how you extended the newly developed silenc...I like how you extended the newly developed silence in the kitchen, to outside at the railing.<br /><br />And the emotions of having left NY and not saying goodbye... Palpable. :-)<br /><br />Nice snippet! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-74944326935565906382013-02-24T09:34:43.603-08:002013-02-24T09:34:43.603-08:00Oh for those uncluttered days when you could get c...Oh for those uncluttered days when you could get caught stowing away and be offered a job without a mountain of paperwork :)<br /><br />Very poignant ending to this snippet.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-84699825766347120292013-02-24T09:13:12.735-08:002013-02-24T09:13:12.735-08:00Will be interesting to see what happens next and I...Will be interesting to see what happens next and I definitely felt the emotion over leaving New York. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-80539465822223428552013-02-24T08:45:27.555-08:002013-02-24T08:45:27.555-08:00Lovely description here.Lovely description here.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-89107784397018238902013-02-24T07:38:02.958-08:002013-02-24T07:38:02.958-08:00Nice details, especially in the second paragraph. ...Nice details, especially in the second paragraph. "The sky put on a darkening coat"...I like it!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5392087297399488618.post-39144149559681683862013-02-24T07:34:33.188-08:002013-02-24T07:34:33.188-08:00There's definite emotion here, some subtle &am...There's definite emotion here, some subtle & some easily spotted right there on the surface. I hardly know anything about Artie but I feel bad for him! Wonder what's coming next.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.com